Oh wow. I really don't know where to start. I loved this, unequivocally. Every single one of the characters were so perfectly themselves, and the dialog was totally spot on through and through.
The peril in this was totally believable, which is about the highest compliment I can think to pay. I sometimes have trouble staying in the story, really feeling the danger, especially in gen case-file stories or when there is a large cast of characters, and this kept me there the whole time.
I now desperately want the fic where, in a few months or years, Dean and Sam run across a case involving a member of the military and when they need info they call up their old buddy Tony, and they work together (totally under the radar, of course) and solve the case, and then I want them to all hang out with the NCIS crew somehow, and just have some more people that not only know what Sam and Dean do, but who are also scarily competent in their own areas of expertise. Or maybe I want Abby and McGee totally obsessed with the fact that Sam could hack their systems, and McGee tracking down Ash, and they get contact info for Sam and Dean and, after they get over the whole hacking thing, start sending them info on the sly, and helping them track Hendrickson so they can stay ahead of him. And. Um, I'll stop now. I got a bit carried away. ;)
Seriously though, I loved this to itty bitty bits, and am adding it to my memories for frequent rereading. <333
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The peril in this was totally believable, which is about the highest compliment I can think to pay. I sometimes have trouble staying in the story, really feeling the danger, especially in gen case-file stories or when there is a large cast of characters, and this kept me there the whole time.
I now desperately want the fic where, in a few months or years, Dean and Sam run across a case involving a member of the military and when they need info they call up their old buddy Tony, and they work together (totally under the radar, of course) and solve the case, and then I want them to all hang out with the NCIS crew somehow, and just have some more people that not only know what Sam and Dean do, but who are also scarily competent in their own areas of expertise. Or maybe I want Abby and McGee totally obsessed with the fact that Sam could hack their systems, and McGee tracking down Ash, and they get contact info for Sam and Dean and, after they get over the whole hacking thing, start sending them info on the sly, and helping them track Hendrickson so they can stay ahead of him. And. Um, I'll stop now. I got a bit carried away. ;)
Seriously though, I loved this to itty bitty bits, and am adding it to my memories for frequent rereading. <333