Oh god where do I start? Loved it hon, really terrific.
So...let's see...
First I liked the construct of this one, gave a sort of outline and then dropped back and filled in the details and I liked how it read very much. I'm getting tired of shows starting with the ending and then the obligatory "24 hours earlier" kind of thing - but this didn't read like that at all, I was intrigued to reach the details of what happened every time. I kind of guessed you hadn't killed Tony, but it still kept up the pace and you had some lovely cliffhanger chapter ends - so glad I kept this one back...*G*
I loved your characters and voices. Have to tell you I was a little worried, as NCIS, although a favourite has dropped a little in my eyes with the additional characters - I shouldn't have worried Gibbs, Tony, Abbey McGee and Ducky were marvellous, Ziva sounded better than on the show and hardly any Madam Director, so I was happy with that 0 especially the focus on Gibbs and Tony.
You really should whomp on Dean more often sweetie, you really do him justice! *G*
Loved the intense behind the scenes work Sam was doing - yeah that was just like him, incredibly careful and manipulative in the extreme - using what and who he needed without really relying or trusting anyone but himself to save his brother - very nice Sam I thought.
Only once I got a bit confused and that was over Duane and the Dead man's blood - am I right in thinking Dean escaped by picking the lock with the pins from the jacket and then dipped one in the mess on the floor and jabbed him with it? Didn't really bother me as that part was from Tony's POV and I didn't expect him to know what was going on either!
Loved the scenes with Dean and Tony, very well matched snarkey pair they are. Loved the recurring vampires and your take on the SPN vampire lore, really gave the story the real episode feel - even down to the gruesome cutting off of the head - very real Dean scene that one. As was the Gibbs scene with both boys where he knows something more happened than he had been led to believe and trusting his own feelings and letting them go - I thought that a very *Gibbbs* thing to do.
Oh and the Bigfoot to the rescue? LOL! Very cute! Nice tag scenes too, finished both story lines off really satisfyingly.
Thanks so much for sharing and I hope you get inspired again soon.
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So...let's see...
First I liked the construct of this one, gave a sort of outline and then dropped back and filled in the details and I liked how it read very much. I'm getting tired of shows starting with the ending and then the obligatory "24 hours earlier" kind of thing - but this didn't read like that at all, I was intrigued to reach the details of what happened every time. I kind of guessed you hadn't killed Tony, but it still kept up the pace and you had some lovely cliffhanger chapter ends - so glad I kept this one back...*G*
I loved your characters and voices. Have to tell you I was a little worried, as NCIS, although a favourite has dropped a little in my eyes with the additional characters - I shouldn't have worried Gibbs, Tony, Abbey McGee and Ducky were marvellous, Ziva sounded better than on the show and hardly any Madam Director, so I was happy with that 0 especially the focus on Gibbs and Tony.
You really should whomp on Dean more often sweetie, you really do him justice! *G*
Loved the intense behind the scenes work Sam was doing - yeah that was just like him, incredibly careful and manipulative in the extreme - using what and who he needed without really relying or trusting anyone but himself to save his brother - very nice Sam I thought.
Only once I got a bit confused and that was over Duane and the Dead man's blood - am I right in thinking Dean escaped by picking the lock with the pins from the jacket and then dipped one in the mess on the floor and jabbed him with it? Didn't really bother me as that part was from Tony's POV and I didn't expect him to know what was going on either!
Loved the scenes with Dean and Tony, very well matched snarkey pair they are. Loved the recurring vampires and your take on the SPN vampire lore, really gave the story the real episode feel - even down to the gruesome cutting off of the head - very real Dean scene that one. As was the Gibbs scene with both boys where he knows something more happened than he had been led to believe and trusting his own feelings and letting them go - I thought that a very *Gibbbs* thing to do.
Oh and the Bigfoot to the rescue? LOL! Very cute! Nice tag scenes too, finished both story lines off really satisfyingly.
Thanks so much for sharing and I hope you get inspired again soon.
***hugs story into memories***